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Post  dark_boy on Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:13 pm

"Rise of A Young Duelist"

Season 1 (Quest to become a Kaijudo Duelist)
Episode 1 :

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This is a story about a young boy named Robin Milford. He's 11 and lives in Riverside village. His dream is to become a great Kaijudo Duelist. But now, he's not ready.

Robin is a very shy person and loved by all the villagers. His mother died in a road accident when he was only 4. His father is a local shopkeeper of a Duelmasters card shop. Robin learned dueling from his father when he was 6. His father always keeps a secret about his dueling history.

Robin doesn't have any special friend. His classmates always try to be his friend but he isn't very interested. He don't talk so much. One of his classmate is very determined to be his friend. Her name is Synthia. Her attitude is totally opposite from Robin. May be she will make some difference in Robin's life.

Enough introductions. Let's see what amazing adventures are waiting for Robin Milford.

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"Ok folks, this is the time what you all are waiting for ," shouted the commentator, "the final duel in this Riverside Tournament between Razor and Robin will start within a minute. Duelists, please come to the Battle arena !"
Robin heard the announcement. He is standing outside the arena ,"why I am so nervous ?" he asked himself,"I never feel like this before ."
Robin walks through the arena. "Making his way to the battle zone is Robin !" shouted the commentator. The crowd cheered very loudly.
" Making his way to the arena is Razor ! "
The crowd doesn't cheered for him. He's one of the bad boy in the village. Some of his friends cheered him, they are also like Razor.
Both duelists stands at the front of the duel table.
Robin looks around the galary. It's full ! The crowd is watching at him. Seeing this, he become more nervous.
" You come too far Robin !" exclaimed Razor, " I'm impressed. But you can't go more than this. I will beat you !"
Robin ignored his speech, "Shall we start ? "
"Of corse, loser !" laughed Razor ," I'll start !"
Both duelists suffles each others deck and put 5 shields and draw 5 cards.
Razor put a fire card in his mana zone , " I summon Deadly Fighter Braid Claw !"
Robin starts his turn by drawing a card. Then he put a water card in his mana zone and tapped it , " I summon Aqua Guard !"
Razor laughed loudly , "Impressive move Robin !You think that your Aqua Guard will destroy my Braid Claw , huh ? I don't think so. "
Razor draws a card and add a fire mana , " I cast Crimson Hammer ! Say good bye to your blocker , Robin !"
Aqua Guard goes to the grave ward. " Deadly Fighter ,Ike !"
Robin puts a shield in his hand , " Shield Trigger ! I cast Spiral Gate ! " he smiled a little bit, "This will shut you down. I choose your Braid Claw , please put it in your hand. "
Robin ends his next turn by increase 1 mana by a water card.
There is nothing in the battle zone. So that means this is anyones game.
"Nice work ,Robin !" Razor said confidently , "You are going down ."
" I don't think so ," said Robin.
Both duelists are watching at each others eyes. They will give everything they have to win this duel.

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What will happen next ? Who will be the winner ? Will Robin get rid of his nervousness ? Don't miss to read the next episode of " Rise of An Young Duelist "


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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  Ahmed_Tariq on Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:49 pm

Looks like a nice start to a promising story. I would advise you to work on your spellings and your tenses, though.

dark_boy wrote:Robin starts his turn and add a water card in his mana , "Aqua Jolter , attack Deadly Fighter !"
Both creature goes to the graveward.

How the hell? o_0

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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:52 pm

Crimson Hammer on Aqua Guard? Why not Comet Missile? o.O

Anyway nice work dark_boy keep it up Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  dark_boy on Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:33 pm

Ahmed_Tariq wrote:Looks like a nice start to a promising story. I would advise you to work on your spellings and your tenses, though.

dark_boy wrote:Robin starts his turn and add a water card in his mana , "Aqua Jolter , attack Deadly Fighter !"
Both creature goes to the graveward.

How the hell? o_0
explain me the error.
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  zanipeo272 on Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:55 pm

um aquajolter has 2k power O_o

and braid has 1k Rolling Eyes

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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Thu Jun 26, 2008 9:57 pm

zanipeo272 wrote:um aquajolter has 2k power O_o

and braid has 1k Rolling Eyes

yeah so Jolter doesn't die, does it? O.O
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  zanipeo272 on Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:59 pm

no,

and isn't the title supposed to be 'Rise of A Young Duelist?'

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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:06 pm

zanipeo272 wrote:no,

and isn't the title supposed to be 'Rise of A Young Duelist?'

yup.
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  dark_boy on Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:04 pm

every errors that u all said has been edited.
I usually write stories in my own country's language. This is my first English story, so there are some errors in here. Dont worry, next time i will not do much mistakes.
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:44 pm

dark_boy wrote:every errors that u all said has been edited.
I usually write stories in my own country's language. This is my first English story, so there are some errors in here. Dont worry, next time i will not do much mistakes.

good luck. keep it up!
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Post  AnnLiisa4 on Mon Jun 30, 2008 5:22 am

dark_boy wrote:every errors that u all said has been edited.
I usually write stories in my own country's language. This is my first English story, so there are some errors in here. Dont worry, next time i will not do much mistakes.
Everything was right ,some typing problems to train .
But what can i say ,You`ve worked hard .
Btw , I`m not a proffesional in typing to Razz
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Re: Rise of A Young Duelist. Season 1 (Episode 1)

Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Mon Jun 30, 2008 3:36 pm

AnnLiisa4 wrote:
dark_boy wrote:every errors that u all said has been edited.
I usually write stories in my own country's language. This is my first English story, so there are some errors in here. Dont worry, next time i will not do much mistakes.
Everything was right ,some typing problems to train .
But what can i say ,You`ve worked hard .
Btw , I`m not a proffesional in typing to Razz

I don't think I am either >.>
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Post  dark_boy on Mon Jun 30, 2008 9:14 pm

thanks for the advices guys. Very Happy
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Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Mon Jun 30, 2008 9:18 pm

dark_boy wrote:[size=150] "Rise of A Young Duelist"[/size]

I don't quite think the size can be changed >.>
btw cool title Smile
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Post  dark_boy on Mon Jun 30, 2008 9:25 pm

AlphadiosThe2nd wrote:
dark_boy wrote:[size=150] "Rise of A Young Duelist"[/size]

I don't quite think the size can be changed >.>
btw cool title Smile
edited.
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Post  AlphadiosThe2nd on Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:50 pm

I wish you good luck!!! Very Happy
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Post  dark_boy on Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:42 pm

AlphadiosThe2nd wrote:I wish you good luck!!! Very Happy
Thanks a lot !!!! Very Happy
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